Tuesday, February 5, 2008

More Haikus

Some of you have expressed confusion about my romantic haikus. Okay. A haiku is a Japanese poem with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the third. The third line traditionally restates the first line in different words. As for some of your problems with "romantic:" I define romantic as going out of the way to do something for your partner, and if romantic makes me laugh, all the better.

Here's a romantic one:
"Making me a king
Wife of noble character
Proverbs 31."
See? Isn't that nice?

Here's my personal favorite (slightly self-serving, but hey, it's my blog):
"Itty bitty wife
Proud of you for working hard
Nice tight running pants."
Awww!

2 comments:

ella peterson said...

that last one is HILARIOUS! i love it! and that would also be a romantic note. :D someone likes your butt... (said in a sing songy annoying voice...)

Anonymous said...

he is going to stop writing these for you if you post for all to see...and comment
jen